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flashplayer5

Age/Gender: 14, Male
Location: Cumbernauld,Scotl and.
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Entry #47

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flashplayer5

New story: PROLOGUE.

Posted by flashplayer5 May. 22, 2008 @ 12:23 PM EDT

I'm going to start this thing now, but I have to go away for the weekend so I won't be able to respond to any feedback left on friday until sunday...which sucks because I love attention.
This story is told from two different perspectives, from the theifs' and the cops'.

But this is the prologue.
3 weeks later.

"BULLSHIT!" LOLZILLA slammed his fist down hard on the steel interview room table, making ghyfty jump slightly in his seat.

He paused, walking slowly around the table, eyeing the suspect up. Questions wandered through his mind, "why is he lying? what's he trying to cover up?"

He stopped his slow, deliberate circle directly behind ghyfty, placing his hands on the back of the seat and leaning over him.

Another pause.

"Listen to me. You're in serious trouble here man, this isn't some unpaid parking fine we're talking here. This is grand larceny...and multiple counts of murder. At least three of those people were police officers."

The terrified suspect was still staring straight ahead, fixated on the door. Beads of sweat rolled down his face. He was shaking so much the chair itself was moving, squeaking occasionally on the bare metal floor.

'Zilla leaned closer in on him. So close he could see the sweat on his face.

"So don't you ever...ever, try to fuck with me."

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15 Comments

May. 22, 2008 | 12:45 PM doberman7 says:

Also, bottle caps.

May. 22, 2008 | 12:53 PM flashplayer5 responds:

Unless it's beer bottle caps I ain't interested.


May. 22, 2008 | 2:13 PM Sawdust says:

I love the placing of an idiot in there, I need to be that black guy that ass-rapes the central character or something.

May. 22, 2008 | 3:51 PM flashplayer5 responds:

*opens castlist* hmm, sawdust rapes character...sounds good...


May. 22, 2008 | 3:06 PM andhination says:

That must be the first time I read the words "don't" "fuck" and "me" in the same sentence on newgrounds.

May. 22, 2008 | 3:51 PM flashplayer5 responds:

Don't fuck me.

That's two!!!


May. 22, 2008 | 4:19 PM Black-Ops says:

Nice prologue, can't wait to see how it develops! :)

May. 22, 2008 | 4:34 PM flashplayer5 responds:

Me too because I have no idea!


May. 22, 2008 | 5:22 PM LOLZILLA says:

I'm awesomely angry in this. :D


May. 22, 2008 | 5:50 PM gamerdakota says:

:(
When do I come in?

May. 22, 2008 | 5:52 PM flashplayer5 responds:

After the prologue?


May. 22, 2008 | 7:15 PM Postcount says:

LOLZILLA is so badass.


May. 23, 2008 | 5:31 PM SupraAddict says:

Dude, u know where xmasraptor went?

May. 26, 2008 | 10:37 AM flashplayer5 responds:

I have no clue whatsoever.


May. 24, 2008 | 5:18 PM KuroiYasha says:

It begins in a very interesting way... I am wonder if I'm good or bad. Hehe. Don't tell me. I'm waiting for more.


May. 25, 2008 | 8:49 AM Sawdust says:

WHERE IS THE ASSRAPE

May. 26, 2008 | 10:38 AM flashplayer5 responds:

RIGHT HERE BITCH! *rape*


May. 28, 2008 | 4:06 PM TheGS says:

Woah, you should be a writer mate, where am I though?

May. 28, 2008 | 6:36 PM flashplayer5 responds:

You? TheGS = collective.


May. 29, 2008 | 2:25 PM Eredar says:

stewart?

May. 29, 2008 | 3:18 PM flashplayer5 responds:

That's my name, been talking to Phil?


May. 29, 2008 | 3:43 PM Thegluestickman says:

Needs moar Thegluestickman...


Jun. 1, 2008 | 7:51 PM NeonFlame126 says:

HE KILLED GREEN-DAY-FAN1 HE BETTER DIE PAINFULLY >:{


Jun. 3, 2008 | 6:24 PM LazyPint says:

BBS stories just sound silly. Proper character names please.

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